Lit 325: Essay 3

A Modern Evelina
By MaryEllen Troendle

Lit 325: Restoration/18th Century Literature
April 23, 2015 
Total Word Count: 838
Original Word Count: 717

Abstract: In this essay, I create a revision of Evelina in modern forms to express the effects of modality on interpretation of the text.
Critical Question:  How has modality effect the way that readers experience a text?
Prompt: I don’t believe that I used one of your prompts.




Emme Troendle
Professor Marvin Lansverk
Literature 325
23 April 2015
A Modern Evelina


The novel Evelina by Frances Burney is constructed in an epistolary format. This format was designed to create a novel through the letters—eyes and emotions--of a 17 year old girl making her way into society. In my creative essay for the class, I address what an “epistolary novel” would look like using modern modes of communication. One of the largest questions I ask about the novel’s format concerning modality is: what is it we want to mean, and what modes and genres are best realized for that meaning? The first thing to note is that the mode that we use can influence how the meaning is transmitted and received to the reader of the message. In the rise of the novel, authors are developing different ways of making a novel in different modes. Epistolary novels are unique in that they send and receive messages, but the reader doesn’t receive detailed narrative unless the author incorporates that in the writing. The mode influences how we understand the novel, and in my essay I attempt to mimic what that would look like in a modern mode—snapchats in video format.
The snap chats are from a range of characters, and the intention in composing a piece with a range of characters was to capture the range of voices that a reader witnesses in Evelina. The trickiest part was to create a dialogue that would mimic the type of events as well, and that’s when it hit me---modern mode, modern format, and modern experiences. By changing those three elements but sticking to “the young girl making her way into society” allowed me to contrast the characters and romanticized elements of the novel to a quick rendition of messages in Evelina.
Kress argues that, “The specificity is the same at one level: the affordance of the logic of time governs writing, and the affordance of the logic of space governs the image. Within that there is the possibility of generic variation. And generic variation of the ensembles, in each case, provides an overall difference of a significant kind” (47). So basically, how we place text and images, even if we have the same material, can affect the overall message of the piece. I believe that I am creating a modern mode of communication that plays with a modern way to send messages. Essentially, Kress pushes her point out to the statement that all genres are mixed genre, but then “what is a “genre”, a pure genre; how and where does it occur; and how do we recognize it?” (52). This is a question that the novel has been trying to answer since the 18th century.
When it came down to composing my piece, I referenced my old friend McCloud. He says “when pictures carry the weight of clarity in a scene, they free words to explore a wider area…on the other hand, if the words lock in the meaning of a sequence, then the pictures can really take off” (McCloud 157-159). The writer and artist must find a balance that meets his steps to a creation of art, and are ultimately left to the creator’s instincts (161). There is twice as much in play when the artist is working with images and words versus one or the other. What I found the most helpful when I was composing my short video was when McCloud breaks down the six steps to the creation of the art, and how the reader comes into contact with the comic. I found the six steps very accurate, but rather “expected” especially when it came to the appropriate balance/procession of steps. I like how he lays out the step 1 through 6, explain the struggles, and then says that people should be a slow and steady purpose from end to beginning (183). I found this very true in my own progression of the short video. I knew what medium, I knew “why am I doing this”, but I have been struggling with step 4, structure. I keep asking “what should I include? What should I say, what is the best way to articulate my argument?” Composition has been so difficult for me. Playing with structure has been the most time consuming. Now that the project is done, I hope that I successfully built a video that will express all the things that I mentioned earlier.
Works Cited
Kress, Gunther. Literacy in the New Media Age. New York: Routledge, 2003.

McCloud, Scott. Understanding Comics: The Invisible Art. New York. HarperCollins Publishers. 1994. Print.

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